OK, this is the first page that has confused me. What is talking? Obviously they are talking about Ort, but what exactly do they mean? Is it common for people to try to steal the fruit from the Deathjesters? And does this mean that people are basically trying to steal other people’s souls/life stories? Can they then sort of ingest the fruit and know all that the person who died knew? Am I trying to jump way ahead of the story in my quest for understanding? Am I, like Ort, someone who just can’t shut up? Tune in next page for the exciting answer to that last question, anyway …
Great job!
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Mm, I love your style and dialogue. I’ll definitely keep reading this.
OK, this is the first page that has confused me. What is talking? Obviously they are talking about Ort, but what exactly do they mean? Is it common for people to try to steal the fruit from the Deathjesters? And does this mean that people are basically trying to steal other people’s souls/life stories? Can they then sort of ingest the fruit and know all that the person who died knew? Am I trying to jump way ahead of the story in my quest for understanding? Am I, like Ort, someone who just can’t shut up? Tune in next page for the exciting answer to that last question, anyway …
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